Senin, 27 Februari 2012

HW paragraph

Apple's iPAD system has many advantages to aid communication. its user-friendly, stable operating system allow the user to set up a system that works for them. This is achieved by downloading application software. Furthermore, the iPAD system has features that help users communicate wherever they may be. For example, instant internet access and WIFI connectivity, allows users to be connected to the internet at all times to browse, use their email or connect to their preferred social media medium. Therefore, the iPAD creates a system that is user-friendly and is virtually connected to the internet, anytime, anywhere.

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  1. Be wary of capitalization and subject/verb agreement. Sentence structures could be more varied. Appropriate use of transitions between sentences, which leads to excellent coherence and cohesion. Content is good; it is succinct and straight to the point, with good opening and concluding sentences.

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